More and more people are travelling internationally for their holidays but it is expensive and bad for the environment. Do the advantages of international travel for the individual outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays many people go travelling

internatially

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internationally

for spending

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their time during holidays,

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it is cost a lot of money and negatively

impact

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for

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the environment. I believe there are significant benefits to

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vacation to other

countries

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rather than drawbacks.

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with,

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backpackers

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is the one of

activity

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activities

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that people choose to release their stress and it can be helpful to

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the locals

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locals

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local

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population from

economy

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sectors and state revenue of the

countries

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.

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place

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can attract

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tourist to spend their time

for

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on

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holiday, many

part

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parts

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of the industries can

be growth

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easyly

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easily

such

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as restaurants and hotels.

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, because of that

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can be a

ways

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to create jobs for local

resident

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residents

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and

reducing

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the number of jobless.

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,

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the natural beauty of the

place

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,

the

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apply

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one

of

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attraction for the tourists is the culture of the

place

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,

while

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it must

traveling

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travel

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for a long distance and

cost

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costs

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a huge

of

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price.

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, The

governmant

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government

should

be utilized

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this things

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to introduce their heritage to the world.

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place

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with beautiful waves can be used to attract

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tourist

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tourists

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and can help the revenue of the

countries

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. In conclusion, apart from the negative impact

for

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on

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the environment,

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internationally for

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tourist

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tourists

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can

really

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helpful to the native residents and

countries

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, there are a lot of benefits for

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thing

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as increasing the revenue for the

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because

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because of

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more taxes and helping the state to introduce the culture

from

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of

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their

countries

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