The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the
number
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of
visitors
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to a certain Caribbean
Island
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in
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over a period of 7 years from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen from the graph that the total
number
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of
visitors
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who stayed on the
island
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and on the cruise increased throughout the given years,
whereas
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in
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some point the
number
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of tourists who stayed on the
island
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slightly fell. Looking to greater details, the
number
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of
visitors
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that
stays
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on the cruise fluctuated from 2010 to 2014. From that time the
number
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rose gradually until it peaked in 2017, with 2 million
visitors
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. Turning to the people who
stays
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on the
island
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, it stood at almost 0.7 million
visitors
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in 2010 and it remained the same until a year later.
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, there was a slight growth in the
number
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of
travelers
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who stayed on the
island
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from 2011 to 2013 from that year the
number
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held steady until 2015 which, barely dropped in 2016. After that, it returns to the same amount as the previous year.
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, the total
number
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of
visitors
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in both areas escalated steadily until 2016
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and
then
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witnessed a sharp rise of about 3.5 million
visitors
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • upward trend
  • steady increase
  • gradual growth
  • sharp increase
  • peak in tourist numbers
  • comparative analysis
  • outperform
  • minor fluctuations
  • stable growth pattern
  • growing popularity
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