the chats below shows what Anthrology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course . the table shows the salaries of the anthpologist in work after five years .

the chats below shows what Anthrology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course . the table shows the salaries of the anthpologist in work after five years .
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the chats below shows what Anthrology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course . the table shows the salaries of the anthpologist in work after five years .
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Anthropology
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course . The table compares the
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wages in their sphere after 5 years .
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job . The budget of anthropology
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the pie chart, 52% of Anthropology graduates were employed in full-time jobs, which is by far the largest proportion. 15% went into full-time postgraduate study, and 12% had part-time jobs. A smaller number, 8%, were doing part-time work alongside postgraduate studies, and the same percentage were unemployed. Only 5% of graduates’ destinations were unknown. The table shows salary distributions after five years of employment. Freelance consultants and those working in the government sector had similar salary patterns, with 40-50% earning over $100,000.
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30% making over $100,000 and
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10% earning less than $50,000. The government sector had the highest percentage of top earners at 50%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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