Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

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their government to find
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because there are problems on our
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, i will discuss both of views of argument and give my opinion.
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plants
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decade by sending
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to explore our galaxy, in their thought of doing
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is maybe giving them the chance to see another
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to discover new
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could help them to cure diseases.
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, some people
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in our plants and be
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be solved by it ,
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be more
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useful
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cure for cancer or help the massive hunger in the world
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it can be helpful if the
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investing in children
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, give the child better educational chances
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discussing
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beleive
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believe
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should be spending it on
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earth
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rather than exploring new
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lives
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out side
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outside
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of the
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earth
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coherence and cohesion
Improve the clarity and structure of your introduction to better outline the topic and your position. Also, consider using more complex sentences to demonstrate a higher level of language proficiency.
task achievement
Ensure that your main points are more developed and clearly related to the thesis of the essay. Adding more explanation and example will strengthen your argument.
language use
Be mindful of spelling and grammatical errors, as they can detract from the overall readability of your essay. Consider proofreading for common issues before submitting your final draft.
task achievement
You demonstrate an understanding of both sides of the argument, which is a good approach to the task.
coherence and cohesion
Your conclusion encapsulates your personal opinion clearly.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • unprecedented opportunities
  • extraterrestrial
  • satisfy human curiosity
  • practical benefits
  • inspiring goal
  • testament to human ambition
  • pursuit of knowledge
  • critics argue
  • imprudent
  • plague Earth
  • immediate attention
  • allocated for
  • environmental conservation
  • well-being
  • quality of life
  • balanced approach
  • advancements
  • benefits for humanity
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