Experts believe that, over the next decade, robots will be doing many of the jobs currently done by humans. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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day and age, many
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are becoming increasingly worried about the impact that AI will have on our lives. Social media is flooded with fake images and artworks that not only impact the experience of using social media negatively
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put real artists out of
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, in certain shopping
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you can already see cleaning robots wiping the floors rather than underpaid and overworked janitors. Many may see
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as a positive, but it’s important to ask, will humans still be needed in a world that’s operated by machines? First of all, it is certainly very likely that AI will replace many of the
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that
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are currently working. Artists, writers, designers and other creative workers are unfortunately the
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are possibly going to be hurt by
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change most, leaving many of them jobless. We can already see ads and billboards on bus stops that are made entirely with AI by companies that only seek to save a penny.
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, machines are
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able to replace more menial tasks. Less than a hundred years ago there used to be factories filled with
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walking the breadline and doing excruciating tasks that are now being completed by robots, making the process faster and cheaper and freeing up the
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to do less painful activities. In conclusion,
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AI may put many
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so did the industrial revolution and every big innovation in history. New
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will be created that will be more compatible with the changing technology and
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will need to adapt to survive and even flourish.

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Task Achievement
Consider introducing a clearer thesis statement in your introduction to clarify your overall stance on the advantages and disadvantages of robots replacing human jobs.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure each paragraph clearly supports your main argument by maintaining focus on the advantages and disadvantages of AI, perhaps by directly labeling each point as such.
Task Achievement
While you provide examples, consider expanding on them with more detail or context to strengthen your argument, particularly regarding their implications on the job market.
Coherence and Cohesion
In your conclusion, reiterate the main points discussed and succinctly highlight your final thoughts to reinforce your position.
Task Achievement
The essay presents a balanced view of the topic by discussing both the potential harms and benefits of robots taking jobs from humans.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your writing demonstrates clear logical flow, with a well-defined introduction, body, and conclusion structure.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • automation
  • efficiency
  • productivity
  • cost-effective
  • job displacement
  • economic impact
  • skill gap
  • high-skilled labor
  • workplace safety
  • ethical concerns
  • technological advancement
  • human resources
  • retraining programs
  • hazardous environments
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