The table shows results of surveys done in in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city. Units are measured in percentage?

The table shows results of surveys done in in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city. Units are measured in percentage?
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The provided graph illustrates the results of two reviews carried out in 1980 and 2010 on different aspects of a life standard in a specific city. From an
overall
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perspective it is readily evident that education and healthcare were considered the best in
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years
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in
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contrast, the
transport
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system was rated poorly in
both
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periods. In 1980, the best results in the “Good” category were seen in healthcare (82%), followed by education and environment at around 72%. Employment was at 62%, and
shops
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had only 40% of people rating them as good.
Transport
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got the lowest “Good” rating at 52%, and it
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had the highest “Bad” score at 32%.
Shops
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received the highest percentage in the “Neither good nor bad” section, which was 24%. By 2010, education remained strong with 74% of people rating it as good. Healthcare and employment
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did well,
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scoring around 72–74%.
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, the environment dropped to 64%, and
shops
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fell to just 26% in the “Good” group. The “Neither good nor bad” responses stayed the same for
shops
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(24%) but increased for
transport
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from 16% to 23%. The most notable drop was in employment in
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section, falling from 22% to only 5%. In the “Bad” section, all categories showed an increase in negative responses in 2010 compared to 1980.
Transport
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remained the most criticised area, with bad ratings rising from 32% to 38%, making it the worst-rated aspect in
both
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years.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words both, transport, shops with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • percentage
  • trend
  • satisfaction
  • urban planning
  • public transportation
  • infrastructure
  • safety
  • security
  • perception
  • quality of life
  • amenities
  • development
  • legislation
  • initiatives
  • community well-being
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