In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In most of the countries all over the world, provincial residents are moving to cities, causing a decrease in the number of
population
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in
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countryside
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the countryside
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essay will discuss the detrimental
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on both
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the city
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and
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the countryside
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. In recent years,
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who lived in towns started to move out to capitals, seeking out a better life situation.
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,
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has caused unprecedented problems one of
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is traffic. Capitals now
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extremely overwhelmed with cars ,
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its
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harmful effect on the environment,
people
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are still moving in, which means it's only getting worse.
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, in Saudi Arabia, the capital Riyadh is witnessing a dramatic
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increase, which led
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that one drive to your work could take more than an hour and a half, based on recent studies.
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is what provides the market with organic goods. When pastoral humans move out, leaving behind
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the elderly
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,
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will cause a shortage in the farm market, which will affect us all.
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, city houses nowadays predominantly cost a lot of money to buy a rent, all
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the increased numbers of humans moving in.
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of
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moving out to look for better opportunities, governments should address
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issue by providing towns
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needs in order to make a balance in
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residence. Based on everything that has been stated so far, traffic problems in cities and the decline in organics in
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the market
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caused by rural
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moving to capitals, making a decrease in the
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in
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the countryside
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can be solved by building formal facilities in towns by
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the government
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The essay addresses the topic and presents both positive and negative aspects of rural-urban migration, which shows a balanced approach.
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The use of a relevant example from Saudi Arabia adds depth to your argument about urban issues caused by migration.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rural-to-urban migration
  • population shift
  • positive impact
  • negative impact
  • urbanization
  • job opportunities
  • access to education
  • access to healthcare
  • urban infrastructure
  • rural traditions
  • cultural heritage
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