In recent years, responsible tourists have paid attention to preserving both culture and environment of the places they visit. However, some people say that it is impossible to be a responsible tourist. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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to take care

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the places they visit. Unlike

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past, they try not to harm the

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and respect

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the cultural

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values of their destination.

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, a group of

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believe that it is not possible for all

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to be responsible like that. I vehemently believe

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to be completely true

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different

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’ cultures and the nature of the

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industry itself. One of the most important reasons why we cannot have responsible

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is the different cultures of the

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themselves.

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come from different places and with various cultural backgrounds, which leads to

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various methods of treating where they are visiting. The respectable values are different from

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region to another region, so the standards of treating a destination’s

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and preserving its

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are different.

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, cutting trees and making fire with them might be a normal action for most

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African

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might be a show of damaging the

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other

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. Another reason for

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issue is the nature of

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itself. Nowadays,

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is an industry and it means many agencies and organizations are involved in it. Their goal is to move as

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people

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as they can to various locations.

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could lead to put plenty of pressure on the destination’s environmental and cultural resources. It is undeniable that the more

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visit a place, the more they produce

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and

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they could cause more traffic and

pollutions

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and

consequently

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damage the

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.

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, when a region with a rich

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becomes overcrowded by foreign

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with different cultural backgrounds, it is highly likely that gradually they affect that place’s values and

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change their

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. In conclusion, many

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try to be responsible and preserve the

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and

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of the regions they visit.

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, some believe it is not achievable for all

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to act in

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way. I believe

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the

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’ different attitudes and the nature of the

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industry; it is not possible to be a responsible tourist for all

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.