The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented illustration gives us information about how
bottles
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made of plastic are recycled. In general, the process consists of nine different actions, that are cyclical and should be completed step by step. First of all, the
bottles
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should be gathered from the special places where people leave
it
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them
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,
then
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there are some special processes that should be done. And after all these steps there are completed new products
As
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In
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the first stage, workers collect
bottles
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and when there is enough number of them,
bottles
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are transported to the recycling centre, where they are sorted. Right after that
bottles
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are compressed into blocks. These blocks are crushed and washed. From these
blocks
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blocks,
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plastic pellets are produced and
went
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through heating in order to form raw material.
This
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material is the final step before producing end products. As soon as the raw material is ready,
bottles
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, pens and clothes are produced from it

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Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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