The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.
The line graphs compare information about the total international and national
students
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who registered in the university in Australia from 2001 and 2010.
Overall
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, the
number
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of candidates from overseas increased over ten years compared to the local apply steady
at the end
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of the observation period.
However
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, the cumulative
number
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of undergraduates from the domestic were higher than those who came abroad. In terms of global pupils who enrolled in Australian universities, the
number
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has climbed about four times over ten decades. In early 2001, only about 10,000
students
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, and became 40,000
at the end
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of 2010. If we discuss the entire
number
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of international
students
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, the increase was from 20,000 to 80,000.
On the other hand
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, the second line graph illustrates that the regional graduates show a constant
number
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of new admissions, only about 200,000
students
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over the year.
Whereas
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, if we look at the student population, the
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has significantly grown from 400,000 to 600,000 within seven years until 2007, and remained the same as far as 2010.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrolments
  • overseas students
  • local students
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuations
  • globalization
  • attractiveness
  • education
  • socio-economic factors
  • implications
  • percentages
  • comparison
  • period
  • universities
  • statistics
  • demographics
  • longitudinal study
  • analysis
  • higher education
  • international students
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