Nowadays, there are many TV shows that allow ordinary people to go on television and become celebrities, even though really, they have no talent. People should not be allowed to go on TV shows unless they can demonstrate some skill or talent that is entertaining. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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very much biased towards their own personal agenda to gain viewership from the public. I
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with the given statement and
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with my own opinion and experience.
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with, as we all know reality shows are very popular
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and
people
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are very keen to follow daily episodes with
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huge amount of
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interest
as they are learning something useful.
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, the youth of
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genaration
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blindly
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people
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who are showing unwanted aggression and promoting bad language on
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reality
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shows
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which are already scripted. The young
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generation
consider
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unnecessary
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and cocky behaviour as talent and
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them as a celebrity. These
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tones
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of money and fake their lifestyle on social media to get millions of followers. On the flip side of it, to create a change in society and
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genaration
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the
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of these
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shows has to
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, allowing someone who has no talent or
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skills on a media platform is a waste of time. They are giving
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wrong message to society and youth that even if are not talented or less skilled they can still make
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a big
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chunk of money and popularity.
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,
these television platform
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should only
allows
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people
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who are highly skilled and hardworking, who can present their talent or something
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unusual
and rare on
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tv
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which can
inspiremillions
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inspire millions
and promote
hardworking
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a hardworking
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culture.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • celebrities
  • demonstrate
  • entertaining
  • talent
  • skills
  • motivate
  • diverse
  • relatable
  • personal growth
  • financial mobility
  • social mobility
  • cultural diversity
  • platform
  • voice
  • standards
  • rewarded
  • content
  • quality
  • opportunities
  • television industry
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