You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is

Jessilia

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Jessica

, I am a medical student in the

last

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semester. I am writing to you

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regarding some problems I

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facing in my accommodation for the past few weeks. As you must be aware final exam is coming in the next couple

weeks

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. I have to focus on my

study

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however

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my roommate makes me unable to study. She regularly

bring

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her friends to stay in our room and they keep chatting until

mid night

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. I have told her to find some other places to hang out with her friend. Eventually, she

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not care about what

said

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. I will be happy if you can move me to

other

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room. I would

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prefer

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you could move me to a

single-room

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single room

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, so I could have my own room and I can

be focus

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on my study. Thank you for your attention in

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case, I eagerly wait for your response.

Your

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sincerely,

Jessilia

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Jessica

gabriellajessiliaSat May 10 2025

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task achievement

Consider using more formal language and structure to enhance the professionalism of your letter.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure to separate your ideas clearly in each paragraph to improve readability. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea related to your situation and request.

task achievement

You have clearly stated the issues you are facing with your current accommodation and your request for a single room.

coherence and cohesion

Your letter includes a clear introduction and conclusion, which helps frame your message well.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

160 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

accommodation officer
roommate
share a room
living arrangement
difficult to work
noise levels
study environment
privacy concerns
alternative accommodation
single room
academic performance
well-being
respectfully request

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