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The table below shows the number of full-time students from India who studied at various universities in the UK in 2020/21 and 2021/22.(Huseyn 1)

The table below shows the number of full-time students from India who studied at various universities in the UK in 2020/21 and 2021/22.(Huseyn 1)
The provided table depicts the preponderance of full-time
students
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 from India who studied at various UK universities in two academic years,
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2020/21 and 2021/22.
Overall
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, it can be seen that Coventry
University
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 had the highest
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,
while
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 the greatest increase took place at Sheffield
University
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. Coventry
University
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 had 2,390
students
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 in 2020/21 and it had 5,290
students
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 in the next academic year by increasing;
this
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change
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 was the highest rate (2,900), and the increase was 121.1%. The boost rate in
students
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 was greatest at Sheffield
University
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, accounting for 187.7%,
although
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 the
change
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 in the number of
students
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 was merely 1,530.
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, the maximum number of
students
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 had been 3,505 in 2020/21, whereby
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was 5,290 in 2021/22 among all universities. The lowest percentage
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 was at BPP
University
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, making up 46.8%,
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 the least
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 in the preponderance of
students
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 was at the
University
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 of Leicester, responsible for 1,215.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, university, change with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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