Many individuals say that spending on space exploration is a waste of money. This, instead, should be better used to solve current problems on Earth. To what degree do you support or oppose this idea?

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that spending on
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exploration
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is a waste of money and
belevie
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investment should be better used to solve current
problems
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on
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earth
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.
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I acknowledge that focusing on
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current
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is important , I firmly assert that spending on
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exploration
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is equally important. On the one hand , it is understandable that spending money to solve current
problems
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on
earth
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is essential with several major
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, it is vital to understand that
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problems
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on
earth
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such
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as
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the enviroment
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enviroment
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environment
, climate change or
economic
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help improve
humanity
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life and prevent negative
impact
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to
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the enviroment
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enviroment
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environment
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as pollution
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of water
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,
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fight against
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climate change that threatens the
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’s ecosystems.
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in
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economic
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it is a important
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it
help
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gain more profit to invest in solving
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and help enhance human
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quality
of life.
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, there are a host of compelling reasons as to why I am convinced that it is
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crucial for spending on
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exploration
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. First and fore more , those
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activities
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a positive impact
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humanity , To be more specific
exploration
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space
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in the long term can help
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find new
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life
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in
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other planet
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in case
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the earth
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earth
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are
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destroyed
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also
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help
human
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find out different species that have intelligent and develop human knowledge . In conclusion ,
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it is irrefutable that spending to solve current
problems
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on
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earth
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play
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a pivotal role , I would contend that there are compelling
reason
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reasons
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why it is
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also
aslo
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also necessary
nessessary
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necessary
for
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invest in
space
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exploration
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