It has been perceived that parents must attend yearly courses in order to succeed in
upbringing
their child. I vehemently advocate Verb problem
raising
this
notion as it enables parents to differentiate between Linking Words
appropriate
development of adolescents and the warning signs of psychological diseases. In Correct article usage
the appropriate
this
essay, I will expand my argument Linking Words
why
I would suggest Change preposition
on why
such
courses.
The primary argument in favour of Linking Words
this
is that loads of people choose Linking Words
late-parenthood
, which leads to difficulty in understanding their children’s behaviour because of the enormous age gap. Correct your spelling
late parenthood
Additionally
, older mothers tend to diagnose their children with psychological diseases and label them for a lifetime, whilst the young Linking Words
one
does not have any just being different Correct pronoun usage
ones
than
what Change preposition
from
he
elderly are used to. Correct your spelling
the
For instance
, a young girl was accused of anorexia nervosa and was added Linking Words
extra
100 grams of fat Correct article usage
an extra
in
their meal all by her mother. Whilst, the young girl did not have anorexia nervosa, she later developed liver failure Change preposition
to
due to
the excessive fat that was given by the parent.
Linking Words
On the contrary
, neglectful parenting is just as dangerous as the previous pattern was. A key factor leading to irresponsibility towards one’s children is likely Linking Words
due to
young parenthood. Linking Words
As a result
of young parenthood the constant focus on children is less relevant, since these mothers are usually more lenient in their twenties because they have not experienced much disappointment and Linking Words
not
all about the news and consciousness yet. Add a missing verb
are not
However
it seems as an advantage, it can be Linking Words
life threatening
for the childAdd a hyphen
life-threatening
,
If the mother is unfamiliar with certain symptoms and conditions, that mothers in their forties would know. To illustrate, in Remove the comma
apply
Canada
a young lady gave a load of raspberries to her Add a comma
Canada,
6 months old
toddler, and the baby died of an allergic reaction. Correct your spelling
6-month-old
Were
the lady Verb problem
Had
have
read through how to introduce allergens in a toddler's diet, the baby would have still been alive.
In conclusion, I would endorse the idea of parenting education Unnecessary verb
apply
for improving
young Change preposition
to improve
adults
mental health by fostering a respectful and empathetic home environment. Change noun form
adults'
adult's
Moreover
, Linking Words
this
initiation would mitigate neglectful parenthood, which is known Linking Words
for
one of the key factors leading to Change preposition
as
child’s
death.Correct article usage
a child’s