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The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph shows how
information
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 was requested from a tourist company in the United Kingdom between January and June.
Overall
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, it is observed that the majority of
information
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 was asked for in person and by telephone.
While
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 letters or emails were the least preferred mode of receiving
information
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 during
this
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 given period of time. The number of
people
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 who requested
information
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 in person was a little over 400 at the beginning of the period, it rose steadily to 800 individuals in March before skyrocketing to about 1900
people
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 in June.
On the other hand
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, the number of
people
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 who requested
information
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 via telephone fluctuated relatively at 900, it remained stable between March and April at 1000
people
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, before dramatically increasing to 1600
at the end
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 of the period.
In addition
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, there was a notable decline in the number of
people
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 who received
information
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 by letter or email from just a little over 800 to about 390 between January and June.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words information, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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