The charts below show the information about a US bus company between 1999 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the information about a US bus company between 1999 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the information about a US bus company between 1999 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graphs illustrate data on a US bus company from 1999 to 2003
Overall
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, the number of customer
complaints
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rose,
while
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both the percentage of punctual buses and the punctuality targets decreased. In 1999, buses had a punctuality target of 80%, which was met.
Although
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the targets for the next three years decreased to approximately 40%, the target was missed by an estimated 10% in 2000.
In contrast
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, 2001 and 2002 slightly exceeded expectations by a small margin. In 2003, there was the most significant difference between the set target, around 37%, and actual performance, with just under 80% of buses being on time. Over the period, customer
complaints
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increased. Despite almost 80% punctuality, 2003 had the highest number of unsatisfied customers, with over 100
complaints
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. In 2002, there were the second most
complaints
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, with 100 dissatisfied riders,
while
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2001 and 2000 received around 80 and 75
complaints
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, respectively. In 1999, there were the fewest customer
complaints
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throughout the period, at just over 50.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words complaints with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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