The charts below show the information about a US bus company between 1999 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the information about a US bus company between 1999 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the information about a US bus company between 1999 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given tables represent the percentage of
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the bus
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bus
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buses
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arriving on target time compared to
its
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their
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actual time and the number of
complains
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from
the
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apply
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users from 1999 to 2003. In the big picture, it is conspicuous that the number of buses achieving their targets decreased over the observed years.
In contrast
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, there was an upward tendency in passengers complaining to management in 5 years. Focusing on the busses’ performance, in 1999, the statistics stood at the highest level at the beginning of the year at around 80%,
however
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, the actual time reached by
this
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mode plunged in the one period after, before recovering in 2001 and reaching at below 80% in 2003.
On the other hand
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, the performance showed a
decrease
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trend in reaching the target, from 80% in 1999 to 38% in 2003. Turning to the
complain
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reports, in 1999, more than 50 bad comments were submitted and continued to increase in 2000
at
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90.
This
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number rose significantly and reached a peak at more than 100
at the end
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of the period, after
decreased
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decreasing
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slightly in 2001

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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