The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided map chart illustrates the plan of a new industrial complex that contains a factory and a residential area for the factory's labourers.
Overall
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, the map diagram shows a clear separation in the complex's sections. Illustrating two different sections, by having the industrial buildings in the central space and the right-down corner of the plan, making the rest a residential area. Looking at the plan drawing in more detail, the manufacturing buildings are located in two spaces.
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, offering a meeting room for the factory's labourers and the coming clients on the right-down edge of the complex centre.
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, providing an office building for the managers of the factories in the upper corner of the same previous centre.
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the graph, the residential section contains 3 separate parts,
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including a parking space on the left edge of the complex.
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, offering entertainment amenities
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as the swimming pool for the employees' families
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located in the opposite corner of the parking area, below the three houses.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • factory complex
  • housing area
  • infrastructure
  • transportation links
  • amenities
  • environmental sustainability
  • residential buildings
  • communal facilities
  • work-life balance
  • industrial development
  • urban planning
  • green spaces
  • employee accommodation
  • accessibility
  • layout
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