Governments give a lot of support to artists,even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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greatly

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in artists.

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some argue that it is unnecessary and funds should be allocated to other public sectors

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as health,

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, and transportation. I believe that the arts should

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be given enough attention because it is equally important as other public sectors and it preserves our culture and traditions. On the one hand, many people

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argue that artists should not be supported because it is a waste of money. They believe that other sectors

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as health,

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, and transportation should be prioritised.

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, citizens expect that funds should be diverted to the construction of infrastructure to improve health,

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and

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transportation

services in the

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. When these areas are neglected it causes adverse effects on society

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as limited and inaccessible hospital facilities that cause queues which are physically and mentally draining, accidents

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of bad road networks, and poor

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standards. These challenges suggest that there are more pressing issues to solve than investing in the creative industry.

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reports in Nigeria, there has been a notable rise in mortality rates because of long waiting times to treat chronic diseases

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as cancer,diabetes and hypertension.

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, I believe that the art sector should not be ignored but greatly invested in as well.

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, it is thought by some that

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should allocate a larger proportion of their annual budget to the arts sector because it promotes national tourism and preserves cultural heritage. As

governments

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spend immensely on the creative industry, more

tourists

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attraction sites like art galleries, museums,

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and theatres

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would become appealing and thereby

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lots of tourists from all over the world which would improve the economy of the

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. Students should

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be educated on their history and ways of life.

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, The Government of the United Kingdom invests in the construction and maintenance of historical sites

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as The British Museum,

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Modern among others which generates income for

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country

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school of thought because it fosters a sense of cultural identity in students,

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and enhances

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the appreciation and value of their customs and

tradition

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. In conclusion,

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some think that it is not important for

governments

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to support artists because it is unnecessary to do so. I believe that it is essential and vital to the growth and development of a

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's economy and preservation of cultural heritage.