Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit

Dear Jonny, Hope you are doing great. I am writing a letter to discuss
few
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a few
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things with you. As you know, I was planning to move
in
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to
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Toronto
city
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City
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before, and
i
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I
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have moved here
last
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week. I am so excited to see new places here because you told me that there are
alot
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a lot
of places
for visiting
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to visit
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such
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as Tonoto land, CN Tower,
marry
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Marry
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land and many more.
Moreover
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, I buy a new three
bedrooms
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bedroom
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home, it has not only a big living area but
also
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a huge parking spot. Moving to bedrooms, rooms are big with
attached
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an attached
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washroom, and
master
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the master
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bedroom has
spacious
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a spacious
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balcony where
i
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I
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can
spent
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spend
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my spare time.
Whole
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The whole
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house is painted
by
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with
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sky blue color which is my
fevorite
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favourite
color so
i
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I
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do not need
change
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to change
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that.
Beside
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this
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,
kitchen
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the kitchen
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is
desgined
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designed
by
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with
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new technology because it has
fire
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a fire
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alarm and
electrical
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an electrical
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chimney which
opretaes
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operates
automatically. Even there is a park
on
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within
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6
mintues
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minutes
walking distance which is
gold
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the gold
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thing for me , as
u
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you
know that
i
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I
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love nature.
As
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With
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your busy schedule, we
do
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have
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not
meet
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met
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each other
since
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for
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long
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a long
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time,
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this
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so this
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is
best
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the best
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time to arrange
small
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a small
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get together
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get-together
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at my home. Looking forward to hearing from you soon, stay safe and healthy. Your friend Ritika

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coherence and cohesion
Try to use a clearer structure for your paragraphs, for example, one paragraph for explaining why you moved, another for describing the house, and a final one for the invitation.
task achievement
Make sure to proofread your letter for spelling and grammatical errors, e.g., 'alot' should be 'a lot', 'buy' should be 'bought', and 'spend' instead of 'spent'.
coherence and cohesion
Ensuring your sentences are slightly more varied in structure could enhance the overall tone. Consider using transition phrases to improve flow.
task achievement
You effectively conveyed your excitement about the new location and discussed various attractions in Toronto.
task achievement
Your invitation to Jonny expresses a friendly tone, encouraging contact and get-together – this adds a personal touch to your letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

Topic Vocabulary:
  • relocate
  • move
  • settle in
  • residence
  • accommodation
  • spacious
  • cozy
  • modern
  • amenities
  • features
  • guest room
  • look forward to
  • excited to
  • catch up
  • explore
  • unpack
  • neighborhood
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