Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Jonny,
Hope you are doing great. I am writing a letter to discuss
few
things with you. As you know, I was planning to move Correct article usage
a few
in
Toronto Change preposition
to
city
before, and Capitalize word
City
i
have moved here Change the capitalization
I
last
week. I am so excited to see new places here because you told me that there are Linking Words
alot
of places Correct your spelling
a lot
for visiting
Change preposition
to visit
such
as Tonoto land, CN Tower, Linking Words
marry
land and many more.
Capitalize word
Marry
Moreover
, I buy a new three Linking Words
bedrooms
home, it has not only a big living area but Fix the agreement mistake
bedroom
also
a huge parking spot. Moving to bedrooms, rooms are big with Linking Words
attached
washroom, and Correct article usage
an attached
master
bedroom has Add an article
the master
spacious
balcony where Add an article
a spacious
i
can Change the capitalization
I
spent
my spare time. Change the verb form
spend
Whole
house is painted Change the article
The whole
by
sky blue color which is my Change preposition
with
fevorite
color so Correct your spelling
favourite
i
do not need Change the capitalization
I
change
that. Fix the infinitive
to change
Beside
Replace the word
Besides
this
, Linking Words
kitchen
is Add an article
the kitchen
desgined
Correct your spelling
designed
by
new technology because it has Change preposition
with
fire
alarm and Add an article
a fire
electrical
chimney whichCorrect article usage
an electrical
opretaes
automatically. Even there is a park Correct your spelling
operates
on
6 Change preposition
within
mintues
walking distance which is Correct your spelling
minutes
gold
thing for me , as Add an article
the gold
a gold
u
know that Correct your spelling
you
i
love nature.
Change the capitalization
I
As
your busy schedule, we Change preposition
With
do
not Verb problem
have
meet
each other Wrong verb form
met
since
Change preposition
for
long
time, Change the article
a long
Linking Words
this
is Correct word choice
so this
best
time to arrange Change the article
the best
small
Correct article usage
a small
get together
at my home.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon, stay safe and healthy.
Your friend
RitikaAdd a hyphen
get-together
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coherence and cohesion
Try to use a clearer structure for your paragraphs, for example, one paragraph for explaining why you moved, another for describing the house, and a final one for the invitation.
task achievement
Make sure to proofread your letter for spelling and grammatical errors, e.g., 'alot' should be 'a lot', 'buy' should be 'bought', and 'spend' instead of 'spent'.
coherence and cohesion
Ensuring your sentences are slightly more varied in structure could enhance the overall tone. Consider using transition phrases to improve flow.
task achievement
You effectively conveyed your excitement about the new location and discussed various attractions in Toronto.
task achievement
Your invitation to Jonny expresses a friendly tone, encouraging contact and get-together – this adds a personal touch to your letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,