Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university educatiom and the governments should make it free for all students no metter what financial background have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

some
individual
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believe that all
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people
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university
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education
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government
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the government
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should make it free fee's access for all
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student
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students
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.In my opinion,
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would firmly agree with
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statement
because
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believe it could help
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student
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students
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to
achive
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achieve
goals and increase
level
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their level
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of
education
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on
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community
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the community
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. The primary
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reason
to
make
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take
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advantage
for able
students
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to access free
on
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university
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education
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is that if government support
students
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by
make
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the
edducation
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education
free that will help
students
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to
achive
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achieve
a goals
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goals
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and improve
academic
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their academic
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skills
for example
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,
found
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find
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a good position in
career
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their career
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lives that will lead to easy lifetime
in addition
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,
this
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method will encourage
students
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to complete
education
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plans .From my own
expereience
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experience
recent
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in recent
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years
i
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wish to complete
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my
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bacholare
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bachelor
bachelors
study
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studies
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but the amount of money that
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university
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the university
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request
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requests
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it
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make me
uncomfotable
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uncomfortable
because
i
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do not have a huge amount of money so i
still
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am still
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on
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the same level of
education
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and can not
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career that accept my higschool grades .
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make
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it
easiler
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easier
for
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student
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students
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to
acces
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access
university
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free
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for free
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make
community
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increasing on
education
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case
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cases
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such
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as
,
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apply
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high
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a high
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level of
profesional
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professional
teachers ,
doctores
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doctors
and so on so if
education
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increase
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increases
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on
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socity
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society
that
make
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makes
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us thankful
fot
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for
the
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advantages
and
benefites
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benefits
from
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of
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their edducat .
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poor
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community
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communities
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always suffer
form
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from
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unemployment because of
less
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fewer
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opportunites
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opportunities
and chances to complete
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education
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their education
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and workes chances that could
helps
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help
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people to
complet
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complete
a high
education
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.
On
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conclusion ,
overall
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,
i
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believe that
student
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deserve to have
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the chansec
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chansec
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chances
chance
and
opportunity
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the opportunity
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to complete their
education
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because it
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will
make their life more
effectivly
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effective
and get high position career
on
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future
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the future
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.
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government is the main major for helps and supports
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student
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students
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to
edducate
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education
and
achivement
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achieve
goals so
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community
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the community
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get
advantage
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an advantage
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and
benefit
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benefits
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from their
expereience
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experience
on
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in
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future
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the future
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.

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coherence and cohesion
Focus on organizing your ideas more clearly, ensuring each paragraph has a main idea that supports your thesis. Consider using clear topic sentences at the beginning of each paragraph.
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Work on spelling and grammatical accuracy to improve clarity. This includes correcting errors like 'edducation' to 'education' and 'uncomfotable' to 'uncomfortable'.
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Provide more specific examples to strengthen your arguments. For instance, discussing how free education has benefitted specific countries or communities could make your points more impactful.
task achievement
Your passion for the topic is evident, and your personal experience adds a relatable touch to your argument.
coherence and cohesion
You clearly state your opinion in the introduction and provide a conclusion that summarizes your viewpoint.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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