Many people choose to travel abroad to learn a foreign language instead of studying in their home town. Do the advantages of learning a new language in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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few years, a large number of
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adolescents
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to leave their own
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in
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to master their
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skills and learn new
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,
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they have the opportunity to study various
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in their hometown more conveniently. In my opinion, acquiring a
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in our own
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is a better option
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the lack of time and focus that individuals might face in
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abroad. One of the advantages of learning a
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by travelling to a different
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is the natural interaction of
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learners with native speakers in everyday life.
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can play an effective role in
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learning process
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since students will get involved with unexpected situations, so they can challenge their
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skills.
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, they will hear
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way of communicating with native speakers which can help them to speak like a native.
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, some countries with unpopular
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have adopted some policies in
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to advertise their
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and culture,
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as offering free
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courses in
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to attract
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from all walks of
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to learn their local
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.
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, if
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learners are lucky enough to get accepted
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those programs, they do not need to pay for their classes.
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, I believe learning a new
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is not a good reason to endure the hardships of living abroad.
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, when
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are living independently in a foreign
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without any support
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their family, they will face
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a lack
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of time for all of their daily tasks including their studies. Because they are the ones who
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in charge of
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such
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as shopping and cleaning and
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they should look for a job in
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to make money for their living expenses,
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these
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learners definitely won't be able to devote sufficient time to studying.
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people
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who are learning in their home town might not face these difficulties, since they don't have that much responsibility or they have their family by themselves to support them.
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, I think living in a foreign
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can affect the quality of
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's concentration which will be a preventing issue for their success in
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learning.
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,
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living far away from their
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ones or friends, are not able to focus on their goals because they are experiencing a sense of missing and lack of spiritual support. In conclusion, learning a new
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in a different
country
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can have some beneficial aspects, but, these advantages are not fully enough to outweigh the disadvantages. The abundance of responsibilities and mental conflicts are just
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hardships that prevent individuals from learning new
languages
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.

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grammar
Some grammatical errors affect clarity, such as 'adolesence' which should be 'adolescents,' and 'is' in 'the ones who is in charge' which should be 'are.' Pay attention to subject-verb agreement.
content
While the arguments presented are relevant, more specific examples would strengthen your points, especially regarding the unique experiences learning abroad can offer.
cohesion
To enhance coherence, consider using more linking words and phrases to connect ideas within paragraphs and make transitions smoother.
clarity
Rephrase sentences with complex structures for clarity. For example, 'these language learners definitely won't be able' could be simplified to 'these learners may struggle to dedicate time to their studies.'
content
The essay presents a clear argument for preferring language study in one's home country, which demonstrates critical thinking.
content
The use of specific details, such as free language courses, showcases an understanding of the opportunities that exist for language learners abroad.
structure
Your conclusion effectively summarizes your perspective, reinforcing your main argument clearly.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic immersion
  • Cultural integration
  • International network
  • Conversational proficiency
  • Financial burden
  • Homesickness
  • Pedagogical differences
  • Culture shock
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