The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph illustrates the total
number
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of visitors
of
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to
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a Caribbean
island
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categorized by the
number
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of them staying on cruise ships and the ones who
staying
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stayed
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on the
island
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between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
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, the
number
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people
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of people
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who visited the
island
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increased over the period, with those staying on cruise ships increased
in particular
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, overtaking those staying on the
island
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itself, which underwent a more moderate rise. The total
number
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of visitors
of
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the
island
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initially
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was 1
million
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, before growing moderately by half a
million
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in 2012. It
then
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rose significantly to 2.7
million
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for the next two years, before remaining steady at that
number
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for a
year
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.
Finally
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, it experienced a rapid surge at 3.5
million
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in the end. The
number
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of visitors who remained on the
island
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and that of people who stayed on cruise ships was
initially
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0.7
million
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and 0.3
million
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respectively. Over a
year
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, the former remained steady, before rising rapidly to 1.5
million
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in 2013. It
then
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remained steady for three years at 1.5
million
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and after a fluctuation over a
year
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reached the same
number
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, in the end. The latter
,
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experienced a rise of 0.2
million
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in the first
year
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,
then
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dropped to its initial
number
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over the next
year
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, before surging moderately by 1.7
million
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at the end
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of the period.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "initially".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, island, million, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapid" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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