The graph below shows average carbon dioxide(CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide(CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows average carbon dioxide(CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares average
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carbon
(CO₂) emissions per person in four different countries between 1967 and 2007. 
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, the emissions of the United
Kingdom
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and
Sweden
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experienced a significant decline despite fluctuations,
whereas
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the discharge of CO₂ in Italy and Portugal consistently increased over the period. In terms of decreasing countries, in 1967 the United
Kingdom
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and
Sweden
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started at a higher level compared to other nations, at 8.5 and 10.5 metric
tons
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, respectively. In the subsequent 10 years, the United
Kingdom
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's CO₂ discharge remained initial level,
while
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that of
Sweden
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surged to 10.2 metric
tons
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. By 2007, CO2 emissions in the United
Kingdom
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steadily dropped until reaching their lowest point at 8.3 metric
tons
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. Meanwhile,
Sweden
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's CO₂ emission displayed an extreme trend; it dramatically fell to 7 metric
tons
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by 1987.
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the next 20 years, it continuously decreased to
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at 5.5 metric
tons
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.
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, Italy and Portugal exhibited an inverse pattern. Italy and Portugal began at a relatively lower point in 1967, each at 4.2 and 1.8 metric
tons
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. The CO₂ discharge of Portugal soared notably until 1997, at 4.6 metric
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, and by 2007, it had a marginal rise to 4.8 metric
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. Italy
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grew significantly to 6.2 metric
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by 1977 and rose gradually before staying at 7.8 metric
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from 1997 to 2007.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words co₂, kingdom, sweden, tons with synonyms.
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