The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps depict key information about the present state and the future enhancements to
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the
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shopping
mall
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and
a
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the
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Southside of the
mall
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.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that there are many construction and improvement plans for the
mall
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and the Southside, including expansion and removal of some
area
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areas
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and main spaces like the car
park
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.
According to
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what is shown, the golf course and the
park
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areas are connected and occupy most of the space east of the map.
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, the fitness center is in the middle of the car
park
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, the golf course
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apply
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the
park
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area, and the
mall
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.
Furthermore
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, there is plenty of space for
further
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projects. In terms of the future map and the construction and developments that will occur later, we can see on the southern side of the
mall
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that the fitness
center
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centre
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was demolished,
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the car parking and the Southside
mall
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will expand to the east. Which will result in
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the
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removal
to
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of
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the area of the
park
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and golf course.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words mall, park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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