The graph below shows the percentage of workers from five different European countries that were absent for a day or more due to illness from 1991 to 2001.

The graph below shows the percentage of workers from five different European countries that were absent for a day or more due to illness from 1991 to 2001.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the percentage of workers from five different European countries that were absent for a day or more due to illness from 1991 to 2001.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of employees with illness-related absences in the UK, France, the Netherlands, Sweden, and Germany between 1991 and 2001.
Overall
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, the percentage of illness absence in the Netherlands and Sweden increased,
while
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the figure for France declined. Both the UK and Germany remained relatively stable over the period. In 1991, Dutch workers' absence rate was just under 5% and rose slightly to around 5.5% in 1992. It
then
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declined steadily to about 4% by 1996, before gradually rising again, reaching approximately 5.3% by 2001.
Similarly
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, the percentage for Sweden increased throughout the period, climbing from around 3% in 1991 to over 4.5% in 2001.
In contrast
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, illness-related absences in France fell from over 5% in 1991 to around 3% by 1996, after which the figure remained stable. The UK and Germany both fluctuated slightly around 2% across the entire period, with no major
overall
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change.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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