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Band 5.5

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapaers or books because they will be to read everything they want online without paying. to what do you extent agree or disagree with this statment ?

Due to
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 the advancement of technology, it is being said that newspapers or books will become extinct as they will be available through
internet
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 services without any cost. Considering the future, I fully agree
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this
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 notion and will state my hold in the upcoming paragraphs.
Firstly
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, shifting towards ebooks and e-media is an eco-friendly approach.
For instance
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, printing requires a lot of paper that comes from trees,
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, deforestation will be reduced.
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, one can
access
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 the informative knowledge through the internet services from any part of the world.
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, no carrying is required, making it more convenient. Many online platforms are available that provide free
access
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 to articles and e-books, reducing the need for printed materials.
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, Kindle and iBooks are some of the main applications that provide free
access
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 to the vast knowledge of books.
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 advancement is best for people who cannot spend thousands on school materials.
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, the newspaper cannot reach everybody;
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, the introduction of these online services has helped millions to be aware of their surrounding.
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, it is irrefutable that ebooks and e-media will replace the printing press, as they give free
access
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 to all the informative knowledge, and are
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 eco-friendly.

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task achievement
Consider providing a more balanced view by addressing potential counterarguments, such as the value of physical books.
coherence and cohesion
Strengthen the connections between paragraphs to enhance the logical flow of ideas.
task achievement
Add more specific examples or statistics to support your claims about the benefits of e-books and online access.
coherence and cohesion
Good structure with a clear introduction and conclusion, effectively framing your argument.
task achievement
You provide relevant examples that support your points about e-books and environmental benefits.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital technology
  • accessibility
  • printed materials
  • environmental impact
  • tangibility
  • aesthetics
  • sensory experience
  • demographics
  • market trends
  • interactive content
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