The charts show the main methods of transportation for people travelling to a university for work or study in 2004 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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key information about the main reasons

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transportion

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transportation

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individual

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the individual

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journey

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journeys

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to

collage

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college

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or workplace or study from 2004 and 2009.

Overall

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it is clear that

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from the pie charts

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the car

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car

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cars

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had the highest share ,

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the bus became the leading category , it can be seen that the lower Segment was

train

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the train

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.

To begin

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with, in the year 2004 , the car accounted for above half percentage of the main methods of transportation , making the largest slice . By 2009,

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drooped

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to 28 % .

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, the bus rose from 33% to 46 per cent . In terms of train and walking they had a

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rise from

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3% and 4% respectively, to moving at 4 % and 6 % respectively . Meanwhile , the bicycle

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experienced a

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increase

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moving

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from

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9% in 2004 to 16 % in the year 2009.