The line graph shows how much money overseas visitors spent in the UK from 1980 - 2010 and the pie charts show the reasons for their visits in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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charts visualize the money transfer done by visitors from a foreign country to the United Kingdom. There is

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an illustration of the

reasons

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for travelling to the

UK

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. First of all, when looking at the first graph, we can see a steadily increasing amount of money spent in the

UK

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. Within the shown time span, there are major changes between the years in both directions. The

pie-chart

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shows the differences

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visiting

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between the year 1980 and the year 2010, where

Holiday

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and other motivations decreased

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intentions

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as business trips and meeting friends and relatives have increased. In the time periods from approximately 1992 and

1996

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we can see a significant increase

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money spent by tourists, followed by a steadily falling demand

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buying services and goods in the country.

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the turning point in the year 2002 that motivation started to

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again until 2006. After that conjunctural phase, the financial transfer from tourists in the

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sunk again. The

reasons

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for

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changed

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a crucial way since the

80's

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,

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the distribution of the different

reasons

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for visiting the country changed over the decades. Nowadays there are

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foreign people coming during their holidays or in their free time.

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the specific motivations,

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as business meetings have increased slightly,

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the share of visiting relatives and friends in the

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strongly increased.