The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main fitures and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram provides key information about the changes that happened at West Park Secondary

School

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from the

begin

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beginning

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of 1950 until 2010 it is clear from the graph that the increase in the size of the car park which now takes half of the

school

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.

In addition

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, in 1980 the

school

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built its first sports field.

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, in 1950 the

school

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contained contain a place for Houses

According to

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what is shown, In 1950 the secondary

school

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had one build for studying and that changed in 1980 when they cut the place for Houses to a car park and a science block,

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however

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however,

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they kept the same playground. In terms of the 2010 change, the playground becomes smaller with the addition of

sport

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a sport

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field. The

school

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's main building has never changed since the beginning.

On the other hand

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, the parking spots for cars or Houses kept changing with time for

science

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the science

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block