You recently learned that a close friend of yours has had a baby, and you purchased a gift for the baby. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: Congratulate them on the arrival of the baby Describe the gift you have chosen for the baby Suggest arrangements for your visit to deliver the gift.

Dear Smith, Congratulations,

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the arrival of

baby

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a baby

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girl in your family. I am writing

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letter to express my happiness and share news about the gift I purchased

your

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newborn baby. I was over the moon

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week when I got to know about your delivery. Hope you and

baby

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are doing great. I remember your delivery was supposed to be after two weeks.

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, you got

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surprise

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some weeks

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Now,

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chapter of your life has started and I hope you will enjoy your first parenthood. As you know, I am working overseas and didn't have time to visit our Country. But I have purchased

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gift for my nephew. It is a big wooden crib. The colour of

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is pink

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is safe to use for

newborn

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. So,

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don't buy any other crib as the one I bought can be used for

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five years. I have ordered it

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online on Amazon and it will be delivered on 25 May. I have provided all your information for delivery. I am planning to come within two months to meet my sweet little nephew. Hope to see you soon. Best regards, Saijbir.

kaursaijbirThu May 22 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure to clearly separate your ideas into different paragraphs for better readability.

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Use a more friendly tone in your congratulations and express more warmth in your message.

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You expressed your happiness about the baby's arrival, which is very nice.

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The description of the gift was detailed and clear, which helps your friend understand what to expect.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

198 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Heartfelt congratulations
Newborn baby
Exciting and joyous time
Thoughtful gift
Special features
Hope you will enjoy
Delightful surprise
Eager to meet
Flexible schedule
Adjust to a new routine

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