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Writing Samples
Band 2

Some people believe that planing for the future is a waste of time because they think that focusing on the present is more important. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Many individuals think that making
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plans for the future is
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wasteful
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 , others say that they have to focus on the current time.
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 disagree with the above
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statement
, In the following
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paragraphs
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would
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higlight
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 my personal views which will
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a logicial
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conclusion
. The first and foremost reason is that
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 is the way to make
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a person
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sucessfull
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successful
 in
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their
 life. in today's world it it is
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important
 for everyone
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or
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she
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make a good
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plan
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 to
achive tneir
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achieve their
 goals . if they do not think
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they care
 it leads
problems
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to problems
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 in their life in many ways . to explain
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 , it is true that
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this
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 time
every thing
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everything
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 is too expensive so if
person
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people
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 spend large
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amount
amounts
 of money on
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useful
 things they do not get
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sucessfull
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successful
 person in
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their
 life
beacuse
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because
 they already know
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in today
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today
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 condition that every things is more costly .
hence
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, when they buy something which is
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unnecessary
 they do not
get
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task achievement
Make sure to clearly state your position in the introduction and summarize it in the conclusion.
coherence and cohesion
Use simple linking words like 'firstly', 'next', and 'finally' to help your ideas flow better.
task achievement
Provide more specific examples to support your main points, making them clearer for the reader.
task achievement
You have a clear opinion about planning for the future, which is important for task achievement.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial stability
  • unexpected expenses
  • career advancement
  • long-term goals
  • structured approach
  • personal development
  • educational goals
  • fulfilling life
  • spontaneous experiences
  • emotional fulfillment
  • embrace opportunities
  • mental health
  • reduce stress and anxiety
  • mindfulness
  • balanced approach
  • flexibility and adaptation
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