The diagram below shows how the Australia Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The diagram below shows how the Australia Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how the Australia Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The diagram below
illustrate
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the process of
Australia
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the Australia
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of Meteorology .And how they
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up-tp-minute .
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to produce
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reliable forecasts.
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clearly incoming
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information.Moving to the second advice
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every
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or
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by
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the
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data from
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satellite
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it
to
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photos and voices .
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third
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provide
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this
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drifting buoy,it's
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especially
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.
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,
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satellite
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produce
tha
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that
satellite
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which is helpful for
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on
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. To illustrate,
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screen collecting by
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devices and we can
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easy to recognize and
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the process ,
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it
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satisfied
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to have knowledge about how they work .

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words satellite, radar with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrate" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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