> The maps below show the centre of a small town calles Islip as it is now, and the plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. >

The maps provide key data about the Islip

town

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centre

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of a small countryside and the planning for the development.

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, it is clear from the layout that the

centre

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now takes up a big space for housing and the park.

In addition

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town's

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the town's

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planned development in the future will

adding

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add

be adding

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more houses,

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the playground will take not as much

spacing

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According to

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what is shown, Islip

town

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centre

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now has housing in the

centre

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, and on the east, we see the playground, as on the left next to the house there is a school on the left side.

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, between the countryside and the main road, there are shops. In terms of the new planned development, we will have more houses, and the park will get smaller to build more housing. On the north, lining up there is a shopping

centre

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, adjacent to it there is a car park but on the right of it, we have a bus station.

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, a dual carriageway will be introduced since there is not one for the Islip

town

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centre

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now.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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