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The table shows data about the average income for one person in dollars, across two different age groups: under 18 and over 60, as well as the percentage of the poor population in three states in the US, namely California, Utah, and Florida

The table shows data about the average income for one person in dollars, across two different age groups: under 18 and over 60, as well as the percentage of the poor population in three states in the US, namely California, Utah, and Florida
The table provides data about the proportions of the poor population in three cities in the United States and the average income for one individual across two different
age
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 groups. the units are measured in dollars and percentages.
Overall
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, it is clear from the table that the Population below the poverty line is the highest in
California
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.
In addition
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, in
Florida
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 and
California
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, the
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 under 18 was nearly equivalent,
whereas
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, the number of people under the
age
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 of 60 is the lowest in
Utah
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.
According to
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 what is shown, citizens under
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 18 in
California
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 are 17%,
Utah
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 is the biggest nearly 28 per cent, and
Florida
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 has the least amount 16%.
while
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 for older people over 60,
California
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 is lower than younger individuals by 13%, decreasing to 8% in
Utah
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 compared to young people, and
Florida
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 is nearly 23%. in terms of the Average money per person,
California
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 has a huge figure 23,000$,
however
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,
Utah
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 has an insignificant amount of 17000 dollars.
On the other hand
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, the Population below the poverty line in the city of Utal has the lowest ratio 9%, and
Florida
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 is almost 12 percentage.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, california, florida, utah with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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