The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides key data about a survey about
citizen's
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citizens'
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coffee
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and tea buying and drinking habits in Sydney,Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart
in
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apply
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Australian cities. The units are measured in percentages.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that going to the cafe in the
last
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4 weeks for tea or
coffee
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in Melbourne, is the highest ratio.
In addition
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, buying instant or fresh
coffee
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is similar in Melbourne and Sydney.
Whereas
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, in Brisbane, they have the least amount of all habits.
According to
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what is shown in Hobart,
a
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the
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lot of people
that
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who
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got
coffee
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or tea in the
last
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4 weeks was 66%, buying instant
coffee
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was almost 55%, and getting fresh
coffee
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was lower
around
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by around
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one-third.
However
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, Adelaide, and Brisbane, are similar in having fresh or instant
coffee
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almost 50% and 35% respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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