should companies provide more flexible working hours

whether or not employees should be provided more
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flexible
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time
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better
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said that it will contribute
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conditions. One of the principal reasons why flexible working hours is the higher quality of job
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flexibility, it will instill
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a sense of
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which is a precondition of
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work
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performance
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that , if general people worked in their own efficency
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,
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would run a higher risk of compelling in the feeling of completing their missions, thereby increasing the more significant their
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quality.
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of flexible
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, yet,
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reduces stress and flourishes job product.
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flexible
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for
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, the higher
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is. What makes providing more flexible
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particulalry
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particularly
reasonable is the increase
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. Simply put, having had more flexibility at working place,
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would enable to have more
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for relaxing after
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period,
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them
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feel
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more
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deterrent them against leaving their job, needless to
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workers
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a way to recognize labor's
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ability
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to have more
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in working , they would have a
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to continue working for
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their
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for
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distractions on working. It must be
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that, by being in the relaxing moments, especially
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flexible
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, they are likely to be distractive under circumstances.
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target and
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, can be acted as a strict solution for
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company
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to guarantee
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performance.
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, there is no doubt that distraction
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still be a major problem for
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companies
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from allow
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by allowing
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their staff
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more flexible working hours. In conclusion, even though distractions can
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by providing more flexible working
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not only
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ameliorate
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resolve around working but
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also
as the way to
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enhance
productivity
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.

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Make sure your introduction clearly outlines your main points. This helps the reader understand what to expect.
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Use clear examples and explanations to support your ideas. This will make your argument stronger.
coherence and cohesion
Check your sentences for clarity. Some sentences are hard to understand. Shorter, simpler sentences can help.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure your paragraphs connect smoothly. Use linking words to show how one idea relates to another.
coherence and cohesion
Pay attention to spelling and grammar. These mistakes can affect how your ideas are received.
task response
You have good ideas about how flexible working hours can help productivity and worker satisfaction.
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You attempt to address opposing views, which shows a balanced argument.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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