The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table gives information about domestic catches and the number of
importation
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importations
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of fresh
fish
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into Perth,
Austalia
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Australia
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during a ten-year period. The unit of
fish
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is measured in
tonnes
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.
Overall
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, the highest amount of
fish
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harvested and sold abroad was in 2009,
while
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2005 had the lowest metric ton of
fish
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caught locally and imported.
Furthermore
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, the number of
fish
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that were caught locally and sold to other nations fluctuated relatively throughout the given period of time.
Firstly
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, the majority of
fish
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caught in Australia and imported to other countries was in 2007, 2008, and 2009 with 6532.7, 8854,
8949
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and 8949
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tonnes
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respectively, compared to the years 2004, 2005, and 2006
that
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apply
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had the lowest number of
fish
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both caught and sold overseas with figures a little under 5,000
tonnes
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.
Secondy
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Secondly
, between 2004 and 2007 there were under 500
tonnes
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of
fish
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that were imported into Perth, Australia.
On the other hand
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, there was a little discrepancy of about 500
tonnes
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in the amount of
fish
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harvested domestically in 2012 and 2013 with values
4,271.3
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of 4,271.3
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and 4739.9 respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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