Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to impose strict penalties for traffic offenses, while others believe that education and awareness campaigns are more effective. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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modernized era, some citizens

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believe

that big tickets should be issued for breaking safety

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others think that spreading knowledge through speeches and other educational mediums is better to make

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aware. I believe that awareness through different mediums is the best option. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will discuss both ideas and In

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I will express my clear side. On one hand, hard punishments could avoid the breakage of traffic laws as

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would be scared to face the consequences of their actions.

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it is really hard to

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the essentials.

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,

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will be more careful as they would definitely

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to avoid the big tickets. If somebody

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to face any situation like

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,

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around them will be more attentive

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so that they can stay away from the similar situation.

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, my friend got a ticket for

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speeding and from that time she

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sure to follow the speed limit.

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, distributing information and making

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aware is a great choice to make sure the

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are being followed as "Prevention is better than cure".

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,

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will have proper knowledge about the

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and regulations and they will know the reaction which they have to face after the breakage

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the law

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way,

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will feel more responsible as they have accurate criteria of

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and

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order, they would think twice before doing an action as they already expecting a particular reaction. I am inclined

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the second option as it is a more positive and better way for

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safety. There are plenty of ways in which information can be

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spread

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around like by

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organising campaigns, adding it

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school curriculums and advertising it on social sites. In

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goverment

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government

should pay more attention

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spreading

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information about

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safety

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and regulations so that accidents can be avoided and citizens

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feel a sense of

responsibilty

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responsibility

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them.