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the line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countrise between 2005 and 2015.

the line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countrise between 2005 and 2015.
The line graph provides information about the
reginonal
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regional
 household recycling rates , in
UK
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,
France
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 and
Germany
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, from 2005 to 2015.
overall
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,
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France
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France's
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 recycling percentage was the highest
initially
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 ,
while
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Germany
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 and
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the Uk
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Uk
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UK
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 showed low rates of recycling
wastes
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waste
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,
at the end
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 of the period the
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Uk
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UK
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out raced
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outraced
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 both
of
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apply
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France
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 and
Germany
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 ,
on the other hand
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,
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and
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apply
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France
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 experienced a decline
at the end
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 of the cycle.
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France
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France's
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 recycling rates in 2005 were( 50 ) and
then
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 ,
it
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they
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 started to decrease
unitl
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until
it
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they
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 reached (30) in 2013
and
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apply
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it showed a slight rise in 2015 reaching
aproxmately
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approximately
 (40).
Germany
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 and The
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Uk
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UK
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 started (20) almost(35) in 2005
then
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, it started to show a steady upward trend .

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, france, germany with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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