Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution, and airport construction. Some people say that the government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily. Do you agree or disagree

In today’s era, humans are very busy in their lives, so people need to take
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in everyday life, which causes air traffic.
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this
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,
pollution
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the pollution
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rate is increasing, and it is affecting our environment.
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, airlines are charging more from customers if the government increases tax,
then
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it will be more expensive for the buyers.
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I believe the government should not increase
tax
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taxes
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on
flights
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.
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with, if we need a stable economy,
flights
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are very useful for long
travelers
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. It can be included in public
transport
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instead
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of using private vehicles. We have to promote public
transport
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for long journeys like more than in a car.
Flights
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are useful, so we can avoid public
transport
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.
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this
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, citizens’ life can be easy and stable.
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, we can save time with the
using
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of planes, as we can reach faster to the destination.
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, if we are
traveling
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travelling
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from Toronto to Edmonton, it
is taking
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three days
in
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by
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car
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the car
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, but via
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aeroplane
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airplane
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airplane,
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we can reach in 4 hours.
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, if
government
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the government
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increase
tax
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taxes
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,
then
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public
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the public
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has to
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struggle, and airports will be closed. If tickets are expensive,
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people will choose another way of travel. As
result
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a result
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of
this
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, we will see more traffic on
road
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the road
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, and it can be caused more accidents.
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, we can see
significant
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a significant
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increase in pollution
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cars.
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, developed countries like
UK
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the UK
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, Canada, USA are using
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as common transportation, and countries like India and China,
they
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apply
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are using
it
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as luxury
transport
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. In conclusion, we can say that using
flights
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should be common as we are using buses and trains. It can help
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our economy significantly as well.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • air traffic
  • noise pollution
  • air pollution
  • airport construction
  • environmental damage
  • natural habitats
  • taxing
  • discourage
  • unnecessary travel
  • impact on the environment
  • government taxation
  • promote sustainable alternatives
  • public transportation infrastructure
  • reduce the demand
  • funding initiatives
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