The chart below shows what Anthropology gradutes from one university did after finishing their undergradute degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The pie chart demonstrates what graduates did after they finished their Anthropology course at a University and the table details the salaries which Anthropology

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earned after five

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of work in three

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of employment: freelance consultants, the Government sector and Private companies.

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, the

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who newly graduated found full-

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jobs and the least pupils chose to work part-

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and study postgrad. As can be seen in the table, most graduates worked for private companies in the first

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, the other

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had the same

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. Meanwhile, after five years working as an Anthropologist the highest income is $100 thousand plus, but the

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of workers in private companies decreased

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and went up in the other two

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. There 52

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of new graduates worked

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15

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of them chose to work

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continued studying postgrad and worked

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. Surprisingly, the

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of

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who decided to study higher grades

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and who did not know what to do stayed constant at 8

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, the proportion of unemployed

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was remarkable at 12

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. In terms of salaries, the first

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working in a private company had the highest

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at 10

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, following the other two

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shared the same

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at 5

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, the people who worked in the third brand

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stayed at the top place at 35

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, but the Freelance consultant and Government sector

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still maintained the same and lower at 15

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, the first type had the same

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for the third and fourth working years with 40

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, people who worked in government had a stable increase from 30

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to 50

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and stayed on the top list.

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, the third type of employment had a fluctuation which declined to 25

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went up again to 30

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