The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates information about individuals’ consumption and drinking

behavior

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behaviour

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coffee

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and tea in 5 cities

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Australia.

Overall

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, the most indicators for went to a cafe for

coffee

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in Melbourne and Hobart cities in

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last

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the last

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4 weeks.

On the other hand

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, Brisban and Adelaide had a dip level of

consuming

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apply

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fresh

coffee

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. The number of instant

coffee

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exceeded the amount of fresh

coffee

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in each city. Detailed analysis of the chart, Sydney and Melbourne were the only cities

which

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in which

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all indicators of 3 habits were higher than 40%.

Moreover

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although

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bought instant

coffee

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and went to a cafe habits over one-half in Hobart, it had a low rate of consuming fresh

coffee

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(38%).

Furthermore

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, in Brisban, rates of

bought

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buying

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instant

coffee

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and went a cafe to drink were almost similar to each other, they were 53% and 54%,respectively.

Additionally

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, the number of

consume

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consuming

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fresh

coffee

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in Adelaide and Brisban were equal to each other, it accounted for 33%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

159 words

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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people think that the government has the duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet, while others argue it is the responsibility of each individual. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In modern society, it is no longer necessary to slaughter animals for producing food, or non-food products such as clothes or medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

Technology has caused the death of traditional skills and ways of life. It is pointless to ensure their survival. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that climate has the greatest affect on people's way of life. Others believe that the economy of a region has the greatest effect. This is both the views and give your opinion.