Bicycles require human
own
power which is considered Correct word choice
apply
as
Change preposition
apply
a
eco-friendly and useful tool for everyone who prefers to keep fit. Change the article
an
Nevertheless
, the Linking Words
cyclists
rate is measured to be the lowest Change to a genitive case
cyclist's
cyclists'
comparing
to other Change the form of the verb
compared
vehicles
users raising a big question. As far as I am concerned, there are main reasons Change the noun form
vehicle
draw
people’s attention with relevant strategies to tackle Fix the infinitive
to draw
this
situation.
Linking Words
First,
it is apparent that bicycles are not born to meet people’s demand Linking Words
in
both speed and convenience, especially for severe Change preposition
for
condition
or long Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
distance
. Fix the agreement mistake
distances
In other words
, bikes aren’t as fast as other motor vehicles Linking Words
such
as motorbikes, Linking Words
cars
,.. to properly function Correct word choice
and cars
in
Change preposition
apply
such
a long time. Linking Words
Linking Words
Also
it offers a great deal of cyclist’s strength to make it operate that obviously nobody can make it. Add a comma
Also,
Furthermore
, in Linking Words
technical
aspect, box-shaped transports have a canopy and surrounding protective layers to hold up any direct accidents or bad weather. A second apparent cause is the shortage of cycling infrastructure that can not Add an article
the technical
a technical
reach
residents’ need for safety. In many big cities, a few bicycle Verb problem
meet
lane
or distinctive Fix the agreement mistake
lanes
zone
for Fix the agreement mistake
zones
cyclist
Fix the agreement mistake
cyclists
is designated
often Verb problem
apply
threatens
people’s lives as the principal Correct subject-verb agreement
threaten
dangers
.
A number of methods are suggested to cope with the problem. Fix the agreement mistake
danger
To begin
with, organizations or individuals have managed to launch awareness campaigns as the best strategies to convey a message about cycling advantages. During the gathering, organizers are able to Linking Words
cycling
benefits including health, environmental and Change the verb
cycle
cost- saving
aspects through many educational Correct your spelling
cost-saving
mini games
, Add a hyphen
mini-games
entertaining
activities; Correct word choice
and entertaining
thus
Linking Words
to encourage
the regular usage of Change the verb form
encouraging
bicycle
for short to medium distances. Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
Additionally
, Linking Words
government
should give a hand to handle the situation as financial supporters. It meansAdd an article
the government
,
they have an obligation to invest more in better cycling infrastructure Remove the comma
apply
as well as
building more bike lanes, installing traffic signals and creating exclusive Linking Words
zone
to provide with safer environment for cyclists. Fix the agreement mistake
zones
Consequently
, these methods help Linking Words
remain
public order, security and healthy Verb problem
maintain
operation
in the region.
In conclusion,many main contributors to the significant decrease are mentioned, but Fix the agreement mistake
operations
also
there are feasible solutions to tackle Linking Words
with
them. Thanks to the support from beneficial campaigns and Change preposition
apply
government
, people now can widely acknowledge bicycle’s merits; Correct article usage
the government
along with
having no more hesitation in Linking Words
traveling
on the road.Change the spelling
travelling
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