You have read about a scholarship offered by a university and wish to apply. Write a letter to the university and include the following information: the scholarship you wish to apply for some details about yourself your academic suitability for the scholarship and any other relevant information.

Dear Sir , I am writing
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letter to draw your attention
about
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the news that was published in the newspaper that your prestigious faculty
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an opportunity to get a scholarship for
master
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students and I am
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apply
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one of the aspirants who is
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for a scholarship . My name is Harvinder
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and I have done my graduation in Physiotherapy from GNDU University in 2016 . I am a gold medalist and secured first position in all the
acedemic
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academic
subjects which is a great achievement for me . I am
a
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ambitious person,
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however
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my financial condition does not allow me to
enroll
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in
master's
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degree .
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,
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your efforts give me a light of hope to
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fulfil
my goals ,
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I have cleared a competitive exam to chase my dreams . Other
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that I have 6 months of relevant experience from DMC Hospital during my internship . I hope you can consider me for
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opportunity. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Harv

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task achievement
Make sure to introduce the scholarship clearly at the start.
coherence and cohesion
Try to keep each paragraph focused on a single idea to improve clarity.
task achievement
Use a formal tone throughout the letter for better impact.
task achievement
Add more specific details about your future goals and how the scholarship helps you achieve them.
academic suitability
You provided personal achievements which show your capability.
motivation
Your enthusiasm and ambition shine through the letter.
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