You have read about a scholarship offered by a university and wish to apply. Write a letter to the university and include the following information: the scholarship you wish to apply for some details about yourself your academic suitability for the scholarship and any other relevant information.

Dear Sir , I am writing

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letter to draw your attention

about

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the news that was published in the newspaper that your prestigious faculty

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an opportunity to get a scholarship for

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students and I am

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apply

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one of the aspirants who is

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for a scholarship . My name is Harvinder

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and I have done my graduation in Physiotherapy from GNDU University in 2016 . I am a gold medalist and secured first position in all the

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subjects which is a great achievement for me . I am

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ambitious person,

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however

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my financial condition does not allow me to

enroll

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master's

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degree .

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your efforts give me a light of hope to

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my goals ,

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I have cleared a competitive exam to chase my dreams . Other

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that I have 6 months of relevant experience from DMC Hospital during my internship . I hope you can consider me for

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opportunity. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Harv

Kaurharvinder2984Wed May 28 2025

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task achievement

Make sure to introduce the scholarship clearly at the start.

coherence and cohesion

Try to keep each paragraph focused on a single idea to improve clarity.

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Use a formal tone throughout the letter for better impact.

task achievement

Add more specific details about your future goals and how the scholarship helps you achieve them.

academic suitability

You provided personal achievements which show your capability.

motivation

Your enthusiasm and ambition shine through the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

174 words

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