You saw a program on TV recently and found it unreasonable for viewers. Write a letter about its quality and content of the material presented. In tour letter Describe what you did not like Make some suggestions Say what you expect from the TV editors to do for you

Dear Sir , I am writing

this

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letter to draw your attention to the Kapil Sharma

Show

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which is telecast on Sony TV from Monday to Friday at 9.00 pm.

This

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comedy

show

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is very popular in my town in which the host invites

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apply

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famous

celebrities

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celebrity

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who

belongs

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belong

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entertainment

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the entertainment

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industries

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industry

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Correct word choice

and

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sports fields and some of them have political connections,

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however

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however,

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he was cracking bizarre jokes and making

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apply

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fun of them which is not a good gesture.

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show

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needs to be improvised if he is calling

a popular personalities

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a popular personality

popular personalities

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then

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he should

exhibits

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exhibit

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some etiquette.

Moreover

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this

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is a family

show

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and

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this

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it this

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a humble request to change the script from

double meaning

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double-meaning

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conversation to decent talk so people can watch

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show

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with their parents without any hesitation. I hope you will consider my points positively and I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Your

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Yours

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faithfully Harvi

Kaurharvinder2984

May 28, 2025

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task achievement

Add a clear opening statement to explain why you're writing the letter. It will help set the focus.

coherence and cohesion

Try to use more linking words to show how your ideas connect.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure each paragraph sticks to one main idea. This makes it easier for the reader to follow your thoughts.

style

You have a polite greeting and closing, which is important in a letter.

task achievement

Your suggestions for improvement are clear and relevant.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

153 words

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You saw a program on TV recently and found it unreasonable for viewers. Write a letter about its quality and content of the material presented. In tour letter Describe what you did not like Make some suggestions Say what you expect from the TV editors to do for you

The Greeting

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