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You are planning a holiday to Australia. You have been given the name and address of a hotel in the centre of Sydney and would like further information. Write a letter to the hotel. Ask about the availability of the rooms and the hotel's facilities. Find out if the hotel arranges day trips and ask them to send you a brochure. You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam,

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
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 letter to get information about the room availability and amenities
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 be provided. I have planned a trip to Australia
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 September with my family. So, I would like to stay in Sydney for one week. I have shortlisted some hotels and gathering information from them. To do that, could you provide me with the updated information on room availability? Actually, we are five family members, and two would be under five years old. So, I need to know If there are special activities for them.
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, my parents will
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 be with us on
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 trip. I was wondering if any
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 facility is available because they are fond of movies. My wife and I personally like to explore local areas and historical places, so is there any trip service available to local areas? In a nutshell, If you are able to send me the brochure of your hotel with food menus, that would be awesome. Yours faithfully, XYZ
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task achievement
Your letter is well-structured and clear, but make sure to ask for specific information about room types (e.g. single, double, family rooms) to ensure you get detailed answers.
coherence cohesion
Remember to separate different ideas more explicitly into distinct paragraphs. For example, you can split your inquiry about activities for children and theater facilities into different paragraphs.
task achievement
Your tone is polite and suitable for a formal letter. This enhances readability and makes a positive impression.
coherence cohesion
You have effectively included a greeting and closing, which gives a professional touch to your letter.
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