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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Assel

The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Assel
The maps
details
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 alternation how a university’s sports
courts
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 changed between
in
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1990 and the present day.
Overall
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, the area has become modernized and with a lot of sports equipment. Some old spaces like the
park
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 and car
park
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 were removed, and new sports facilities were added. The number of tennis
courts
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 has doubled. In 1990, the left side of the map had a
park
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 with trees and a car
park
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.
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, in the current layout, these have been completely removed to make space for a large basketball court. On the right side, the outdoor swimming pool was changed to an indoor pool.
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, a fitness
center
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 was built next to the changing room. The café, reception, and changing room stayed in the same place
in
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 both maps. Another change is the tennis
courts
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. In 1990, there were two tennis
courts
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. Now, there are four
courts
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 in the same area.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words courts, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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