the graph below shows chaina population by age group starting in 1906 and including forecast in 2050.

the graph below shows chaina population by age group starting in 1906 and including forecast in 2050.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the graph below shows chaina population by age group starting in 1906 and including forecast in 2050.
the line graph provides information about China’s population divided by ages from
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0-14 15-64 ,and 66 plus including forecast from 1960 to 2050.
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, from 15-64 and 66 plus age groups rose significantly over the period,
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,the 0-14 age group declined sharply , In the beginning,the 0-14 rate was the highest and by the end, it was the lowest . the 15-64 line became the highest percentage among the other groups . In 1960 , the numbers of 15-64 and 66 plus started at approximately ,5% and 36% respectively . 15-14 percentage rose significantly attaining a peak of about 70% in 2020
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gradually decreased to nearly 52% in 2050.
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, 0-14 dropped steadily reaching about 17,5%
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of the cycle.
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increased incrementally by 2010 from there it grew quickly surpassing the 0-14 line in 2040 , and continued rising achieving almost 30% in 2050.

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